feedback.

1. What do you like/dislike about the magazine cover?
2. How can you tell it's a music magazine?
3. Is the contents page suitable?
4. Do the cover, contents and double page link together? Why?
5. What would you change about any of the magazine?
6. Is the genre obvious?

Evaluating Feedback

From my 25 word pitch, I have received feedback from peers on what their opinions on my concept are. Things people liked about my idea was the fact that it 'showcased unsigned talent'. I feel this is one of the points I will have to emphasise in my magazine, as this is what makes my piece unique and a selling point. A criticism of my pitch was that it did not apply to my target audience of 13-25 year old males. I shall undertake further research into my market in order to reevaluate my target. Apart from that, I have had mainly positive feedback - and therefore I shall keep to my original ideas.